Wow, that's reallygood. I loved the last lines the most actually. I have no complaints, Well done! I hope to see more from you!

Very good poem, hard to fault it really. yuo wrote it very well

Wow that's a very good poem! Though I had to look up every second word I loved it! And thanks to you my vocabulary has been broadened. ;)
Well done

Yea u need to join my friends band and write music with us, keep it up