Antidote for a Poisonous Son

by Jeffrey   Dec 22, 2005


Her room is filling with water
and she never learned to swim
tried everything they taught her
but her chances were just too slim

the cowardly halt the pain
the wise let it reach the brain
its learning that keeps you sane
but if you never try, you can't complain

repulsed by the path she found
a dark corridor filled with shame
humiliated, but safe and sound
she lived, but no one knew she came

all these people want her free
she just wants to stop the clock
no one knew she had the key
to her very own personal lock

her room is running out of air
and her lungs are soon to give
sick of hearing life isn't fair
but i know she wants to live

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  • 18 years ago

    by mistressxsork

    All these people want her free
    she just wants to stop the clock
    no one knew she had the key
    to her very own personal lock

    ^^ Holy. that is good. Me like. But the rest is BLAHHHH. =l
    Overall Rating: 4.5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by myshiningstar14

    Mmore detiual here and a great rhyming..also excellent poetic meter...awesommme.

    Lissa

  • 18 years ago

    by NothingGoldCanStay

    Heh. Jefferrrs, even though I already wrote you a comment.. I decided to write another one.. Because I am Oh-So-Cool. Plus i'm your #1 fan =]. Anywho I love the poem.

    P.S-I have a new commercial. Heh.

    XxROARxX

  • 18 years ago

    by limp

    WRITE A NEW POEM

    demanded by your many fans ;]

  • 18 years ago

    by NothingGoldCanStay

    Woah. Jeffness! Nice poem. B-e-a-yewtiful write.
    P.s- How many more point do i have befor I have a billion?
    5/5
    XxXYour#1FanXxX
    *shows everyone my t-shirt*

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