Where am I going?

by ~ShOoOT4ThEmOoON~   Dec 22, 2005


Sitting.
By myself.
No people around,
no time to spare.
Gone. It\'s gone.
Not sure what i mean,
but it\'s gone.
Gone with the autumn winds,
and the spring rains,
and the winter snow.
Don\'t know where i\'m going.
Not sure where i\'ll stop.
Do you know?
A breath.
A short one, nonetheless a breath.
Taken in,
by you.
I see your face,
your soft face,
and suddenly i\'m not alone.
Not doing nothing.
Nothing at all.
Ofcourse, in a sense,
nothing is something,
so something.
something at all.
Lightly touched.
On the face,
by a raindrop.
A single raindrop.
I know where i\'m going,
and where i\'ll stop.
I\'ll go to you,
and stop when i get there.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Koriey Korrupted

    Well another Great success.If you would have used full sentences it would of stole the whole meaning of a silent loliness.I love it.

  • 18 years ago

    by so in loveee

    I like this poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Jess

    Thats really good, the short sentences really add to the effect of making the person in the poem seem alone. its really sad!! well done xx

  • 18 years ago

    by ~ShOoOT4ThEmOoON~

    It rocks cuz i wrote it!