by ~ShOoOT4ThEmOoON~ Dec 22, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
Sitting. |
Well another Great success.If you would have used full sentences it would of stole the whole meaning of a silent loliness.I love it. |
by so in loveee
I like this poem |
by Jess
Thats really good, the short sentences really add to the effect of making the person in the poem seem alone. its really sad!! well done xx |
It rocks cuz i wrote it! |