Thank you very much for the comment. this was a great poem, and it was truley sad. i really enjoyed it, it spoke of true pain. and im sorry for eveything going on. if you ever need anything just send me a messege i'd love to help. 5/5 always xoxo
-Kit

Its very deep and well written, but I don't like cutting... The flow was great, the word choice was decent and the concept was amazing! keep it up :P

You portrayed your emotions in a good way here. I like the elements of dark poetry which made the atmosphere of this poem very effective.
Honestly, I personally dislike the rhymes through this piece because they seem basic and forced. I don't want to offend you but I think that this poem would be more powerful without rhyming scheme.
All in all, you did a great job. I like the imagery from the beginning to the end, it is very vivid.
You should capitalize I in the second line of the sixth stanza.
Overall, 5/5 from me