POEM .:*untitled*:.

by Puerto_Rican_Chick   Dec 22, 2005


I breath and inhale the toxic air that poisons my very bit of soul.
my mind corrupted by those who deceive, i try my hardest to stand bold.
as morning comes and night proceeds.
everyday a bit of life is sucked out of me.

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shh...
listen closely my dear friend,
my heart faintly beats.
this earth kills slowly,
that, many people do not see.
most people see time as infinite
and take advantage of the everyday things.
no please or thank you,
such words has no mean.
but others see life so precious,
more valuable then the most expensive gold.
they love so dearly...
and that love they tightly hold.

Life...
what craziness it brings,
but like all in the hardest times.
we all have to stand strong
even through the hardest things.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    Nice poem. I agree with Nate about checking the spelling. But as always writing how you feel is a bonus.

    --Sher

  • 18 years ago

    by The Poetic Child

    Hey this is the Real Drummer Boy, My Gf typed the other one, Well Great poem and thanx for your comment i appreciate it, ill ttyl sometime
    PeAcE OuT

  • 18 years ago

    by Puerto_Rican_Chick

    LMAO... hey!
    leave me and my spelling as is and dont say a word, in my mind its always right. so yeah i need to work on my spelling and ill do so. lol thanks for the coment cause it really made me and my brother laugh.

    Laterz,
    BX Girl*