Wake Up

by Russell   Dec 23, 2005


Wake up from your suicidal dreams
Tell yourself it'll be fine
It's not as bad as it seems
and you need to quit walking that thin line

Wake up from the spell you are in
and see things in a different way
Even when bathed in sin
You can find another manner to get away

Wake up and heal your scar
Quit loathing in your hurt
See what you really are
and not to become inert

**please comment and vote....if i need to make it longer please tell me*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Dreams

    I think the message you're trying to convey here is deep and I got it so I feel that it's not necessary to make it any longer. But still, it's just my opinion. =) Anyway, this is quite an encouraging poem, something so true and yet few can truly see it. Thanks for penning it in words. =)

    One thing though I had in mind,
    'You can find another manner to get away'
    I feel that 'manner' kind of disrupt the flow a little there, though I can't think of a better word for you as this is your poem... Anyway, maybe it's just me. =P

    This is a worthy read, thank you.

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    This is pretty good! you have a clear strong message and thats what i like to see! keep it up!

    sammie

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