Omgsh...you always get to me with your poems. This is so sad and so good. You are such an amazing writer!

Omg this was a great poem i loved it so much it was so sad your the best your such at wonderful writer i loved it so much keep up the great work and thanks for supporting me and commenting on my poems and being a great friend!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

This poem is amazing. People shouldn't be treated like that. Your an amazing writer.

It reminds me of emo kids. Well, I am labelled as one, but I don't look like a geek. I am quite cute actually *lies through his teeth* haha, ok fine, so I'm not. You know what they say, we'll end up working for a geek someday. Awesome stuff :)

Wow this is so touching and so sad. I cant believe there are ppl ou there that could treat ppl like dirt. I dont know what to say. Just that this is really good and deserves more than 5. You did really good in expressing all the feelings and emotions on this one. Great job, and thanks for always commenting on my poems. You are awesome. A true friend. And I love all your poems. Keep them coming.

::MELI::

0hh hun a t0uching piece very hearfetl l0t 0f em0ti0n darl very well written!! keep up the gr8 w0rk!!

Wow i'll be his friend...lolz...i think i can help that kid...lolz..its cuz i have a big heart like that...lolz well this poem is sooo sad and i feel for him and understand what he's going thru...well this is an amazing poem girl...5/5...u are amazing

Awwwwwwwwwwwwww! that's so sad! i think everyone should read this.. 10/10!

How very touching and sad...... unfortunately so true. Its a shame how kids tease each other and whats even worse is what parents do to their kids. Makes me wanna beat the crap outta this poor little boys dad and lets see how he feels. A very powerful message in this write Gesselle and written beautifully from such a caring and loving heart

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Very sad and very touching!!! This is very powerful and beautifully written... Well done!!

~*Aww thats soo sad ur a really great writer keep it up 5/5*~ XoXo

Hey gorguz, i really really loved dis poem, u r so talented babe, mi god i cant believe how g0od dis iz....did u just write it or did u get inspiration...or is it about someone? well i luv yA lots n im always here 4 ya, mwa

Amazing! Sad but Awesome! 5.5!

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THAT WAS CRAZY
U HAD ME ALL CHOKED UP!!!
that was really good and it makes my poetry look like children doodles.
bravo...u already kno your score from me...1/5...JUS PLAYIN!

Great job!! I hope this isn't a true story about someone though. There are a lot of ppl out there like your little boy in your poem that go through that everyday!
Great job!
5/5
Chelsi

That was a great poem. i can't believe ppl are actually treated like that. it's so sad. but keep up the great work!

This is a great heartfelt poem and so true. u have expressed the pain many poeple go through i mean i dont no wt its like but you have helped lay it out for me. this is a great poem. great use of rhyme that works. u dont really give the boys feelings but still manage to get it through. great poem. i loved it. a great 5. i love this poem and i hope you keep up the good work. take care.

I certainly hope these poems about broken homes you write aren't from your own personal experience.

They are well written though.

Wow, this poem gets a 10/5! It had a great message and strong emotions written in it. I really felt a strong love for this poor child, whose only mistake was trying to be strong which isn't a fault at all.

-Tainted Mikochan

This is a really good poem... it not only lets you see the charcter but it portays lot of emotion. 5/5