Comments : The Geek

  • 18 years ago

    by Leanne

    Dearest love,
    You have a beautiful gift...
    Not one girl at your age have I seen write so well.
    Don't let it go, your amazing.
    Leanne~

  • 18 years ago

    by L0ST_M3M0RYx3

    Love this poem!!! my fav.

  • Hey that is sooo sad, but youve written it really well!'great job, love mel

  • 18 years ago

    by Anick

    Wonderful Work!
    You are a very talented poet.
    Keep on writing!
    A-T.

  • 17 years ago

    by Danielle

    I love this so much. I write poems like this alot, I even wrote a series... it's just a terrible thing :( Bye Sweetie. Hope all is well

  • 17 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Thats an excellent poem, keep writing. take kare x x x

  • 17 years ago

    by Wallace

    Very nice, i really enjoyed this, loved the start, loved the ending good job.

  • 17 years ago

    by Veamm

    Great woek..no questions ask...5/5 for it..well if have a time do read my piece too..

  • 16 years ago

    by slighte

    This is very well written. very emotional, truly moving piece.

    well done.
    5/5

  • 16 years ago

    by Spider Monkey

    I can see this happening in my head. it's so sad ='(
    i'm actually crying.
    this is a great visual.

  • 7 years ago

    by Lost One

    Change the dad to mom, the shirt to hoodies, and remove the glasses... my story.

  • 3 years ago

    by Jack

    What a poem!