by Leanne
Dearest love, |
Love this poem!!! my fav. |
Hey that is sooo sad, but youve written it really well!'great job, love mel |
by Anick
Wonderful Work! |
by Danielle
I love this so much. I write poems like this alot, I even wrote a series... it's just a terrible thing :( Bye Sweetie. Hope all is well |
by Baby Rainbow
Thats an excellent poem, keep writing. take kare x x x |
by Wallace
Very nice, i really enjoyed this, loved the start, loved the ending good job. |
by Veamm
Great woek..no questions ask...5/5 for it..well if have a time do read my piece too.. |
by slighte
This is very well written. very emotional, truly moving piece. |
I can see this happening in my head. it's so sad ='( |
by Lost One
Change the dad to mom, the shirt to hoodies, and remove the glasses... my story. |
by Jack
What a poem! |