I like this poem alot..i can relate to it and that is what the best thing about it..your a good write keep it up

Hi Allison. You asked for a critique. so this is mine. Poems do not have to have a rhyming structure, but that is what I prefer. The work that goes into creating the structure and rhyme is displayed in reading.
That being said, your emotions bleed through your words in a way that most people can Definitely feel. I really liked this poem. You have quite an emotional base. 4/5 for structure 5/5 for emotional content. 5/5 readability.