Any one that reads this, i jsut want to know what you think. i think this is one of my better poems, so if you will comment i promise i will do the same!! thanks, lots of live

Tiffani

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No doubt, this seems to be the best of all so far...& u hv played a very matured role in it.
great poem indeed!!

all the best and take care

Thank u so much 4 all your comments. i will be sure to return the favor!

Love tiffani

This is not ur best poem,, try and rhime a little more, but other wise it not too bad,,, keep writing!!

**doz an1c me?**

THANX ALL!!
Love tiff

Aww thats sweet...i loved this poem its very unique and it is really good.

Omg thats horribal.
but thank u for commenting,,

StAy StRoNg

TaKe CaRe,,

LoTa LoVeN,,

T!FF@N!

Very nice poem..i felt like this before. i loved it. 5/5
~*Katherine*~

Very nice poem..i felt like this before. i loved it. 5/5
~*Katherine*~

Thank u Katherine! this was a really hard poem for me to write, and its still a very hard issue for me, but thanks for your comment!!

TaKe CaRe,,

LoTa LoVeN,,

T!FF@N!

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