Death's Kiss

by Syn   Dec 23, 2005


If you feel you want to die,
Don't slit your wrist.
Because its not up to you,
When your given death's kiss.

Yes, it will be hard
But this much is true.
If i was able to do it,
Then so should you.

Keep your head held high,
Its all I can say.
It will better your odds,
To find a brighter way.

When you feel life is hell,
Look to the sky.
Ask God your questions,
When you wonder "Why?"

Broaden your horizons,
Cast away your fears.
Hold in the heartbreak,
Don't cry hopeless tears.

Just keep holding strong,
Hours deep in prayer.
Keep yourself together,
God is always there.

-Syn

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  • 17 years ago

    by Fluffy

    "Broaden your horizons,
    Cast away your fears.
    Hold in the heartbreak,
    Don't cry hopeless tears"

    -An inspiring and heartfelt piece, David. Both the rhyme and imagery work very well throughout the piece and you've structured it well.

    God is watching us all, David, you're right. But we needn't spend hours praying each day if we feel he is not listening. There was a reason why we are all taught the words 'Thank you' & ‘sorry’ at a very young age. :)

  • 18 years ago

    by Sondos

    This poem portrays everything I believe in so well. Your rhyme scheme is excellent and its so inspirational and I really do love the title.

    Sondos

  • 18 years ago

    by Once an Angel

    Wow hunni that is really really great message. This was so so so good. So many more people should read this poem and learn from it. We only have one life and one time to enjoy it, it's not our job to cut it short when we think we at done. I have a poem with the same idea as well called Suicide Through Someone Else's Eyes so I agree with you completely.

    -Tainted Mikochan

  • 18 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    I love this poem, its fantastic. keep it up
    xxx
    love Tara-Kay

  • 18 years ago

    by christina marie

    Omg! your poems are sooooooo AWESOME! i love your style and just the flow of your poems, i'm looking forwrad to more of your work!

    Take Care!
    **Lolli**

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