Can We Go Home Yet?
by Emm Dec 23, 2005
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You told us we're moving and 6 years later we did. Some of us happy and some of us just didn't fit in. 4 years later everything starts to crash. We haven't hit rock bottom yet but hopefully we'll last. As a family and as friends we get tired of each other and always on end. Dad comes home stressed mom comes home and tries her best. But everything we do just doesn't help at least enough to count. They say their grateful but what they're really hoping for is a miracle. |
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18 years ago
by Emm
What do you mean proper line spacing? ... anyways it's about my family around Christmas time we moved from our home town and we're not doing very good to where we moved ... some of us didn't want to come but knew we didn't have a choice ... if you get what i mean
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18 years ago
by The Wingless
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18 years ago
by The Wingless
I' back to comment again. this one wasn't as good as the other one in my opinion, you did a nice job though, but I don't really understand the focus, you moving somewhere that you couldn't really be? Elighten me, I really don't understand. Also, once again I am going to say proper line spacing is a must. It makes it easier for the reader.
Keep up the good work
