I' back to comment again. this one wasn't as good as the other one in my opinion, you did a nice job though, but I don't really understand the focus, you moving somewhere that you couldn't really be? Elighten me, I really don't understand. Also, once again I am going to say proper line spacing is a must. It makes it easier for the reader.

Keep up the good work

*I'm

What do you mean proper line spacing? ... anyways it's about my family around Christmas time we moved from our home town and we're not doing very good to where we moved ... some of us didn't want to come but knew we didn't have a choice ... if you get what i mean