I know he is older, I know he lies

Hmm, I never thought anyone would think of putting that into a poem. It shows a certain amount of maturity, and will definately earn you some points for thinking out of the box. I'm impressed by your work! Excellent job :)

I completely agree!!!!!

Wow..I am actually going through some trouble like taht RIGHT NOW!!!! and it botehrs me sooo much. I mean i like him and he likes me. I am 14 he is 17. My friends tell me that it isnt that much of an age difference. He is a Junior i am an 8th grader..My friends tell me to date him and my mom WOULD NEVER approve. He use to have a serious g/f and ya we all know what went on every weekend..But um...He says he would NEVER even want to do anything liike that with me..but i dont know..im a wreck..lol

who knows
if u can help me in any way private message me? thanks tons. . .

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Nice poem hun and very much true, it's crayz how things are these days and how people in the world ttreat eachother keep up the good work 5.5

This is a very true poem. I really like your stuff, because it touches upon topics that need to be discussed. I really hope people read this and learn from it. I'm a guy, and I know people who use younger girls. Fortunately I am not one of those guys. Anyways, great stuff though.