Awwwwwwww my freaking goodness this is soo cute your amazing keep up the amazing work 5.5

Omg! This poem is simply amazing.... it's so romantic and sweet and the rhyming pattern and flow was perfect! Awww *tear* I wanna find my one true friend! =) Great job on this

Wow Darien that’s simply fantastic. Truly beautiful. I always have issues writing love poetry, I can’t seem to ever get it right. Maybe I’m just missing the proper inspiration in my life.

Beautiful, sweet, touching and cute... amazing poem. 5/5 Great job, always take care and keep it up...it was a awesome poem...specially those lines:

I'm making wishes that I want come true.
My favorite one is being here with you.

HOLY CRAP Darien, that is one very breathtaking poem. Made my heart go pitter patter, thats for sure. Beautifully written, so touching and heartfelt, I could just picture everything you described........... what a loving and caring heart you have!

Smiles, Hugs and Love, Angela

Well done Darien, a beautiful write my friend :)

WOW! This poems was so amazing! Great job. Keep writting.
~Smiles~

That is so beautiful, the words went together so nicely. so sweet!

"Shooting stars and fireflies" explains what every one is thinking at that moment that you know your in love

Hey that was really g0od. beautiful piece. well d0ne great j0b 0n it. great use 0f w0rds t0o. keep it up!! =)

l0tz 0f l0ve -*x00o00x*-
d0ra

Wow... great poem. I love it. I give you 5/5. Keep up the good work.

Beautiful
that is all i have to say. :)

Wow, simply wow. im amazed. beautiful piece of work.Wow!

OMG i loved i wish i could write like you i have been trying for awhile now to write a love poem and i cant yours was B-E-A-U-TI-FUL

This is a good peom. Keep it up

As I've mentionned before, I very much enjoy this poem. I love your writing you have such nice rhythm and flow which evokes emotion from the readers. I really loved the title! I'm bad with titles. Keep writing, I can't wait for your next one. *hug*

-Kim

You my friend, are a true writer. perfect, pure emotion and feeling, a great rhyme and flow. 5/5 man, keep it up, I wish you and your band the best of luck, check out some of my poems if you get the chance. keep it up. -MC-

Wow this poem was really good i loved it so much!!!!!!!!

Great job....Darien...a beautiful write.

Oh my goodness another amazing poem ♥