by firexflys Dec 23, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
first love
R/R/C I'll do the same and yes i got the idea listening to Mariah Carey song. this is for some one who is so very impotent to me i just want him to see how much. |
by Ladida
Another good one! I have one of these guys in my life too! |
Lol. sorry for the mix up. |
I dunno why it has that low of a rating, it was choppy in some places but overall a good write, keep it up and i love that song lol |
by Sherry Lynn
This poem is very nice; however, I would recommend breaking it up into stanza's. For one is would help the flow and two it would be easier for the reader to read it. |
by dora
I dun0 y the l0w v0te man. this was really g0od. and i luv that mariah carey s0ng l0lz g0od j0b 0n it keep up the great w0rk |