I dun0 y the l0w v0te man. this was really g0od. and i luv that mariah carey s0ng l0lz g0od j0b 0n it keep up the great w0rk

This poem is very nice; however, I would recommend breaking it up into stanza's. For one is would help the flow and two it would be easier for the reader to read it.

Just a suggestion...

Very nice

--Sher

I dunno why it has that low of a rating, it was choppy in some places but overall a good write, keep it up and i love that song lol

if u have time and wanna read a poem i have one called dark angel that im obsessed with for the moment

~Natalie~

Lol. sorry for the mix up.

anyways, i like this poem. super wseet!!

Another good one! I have one of these guys in my life too!