Good job on this one. i can relate because it happened to me. i know it really hurts but dont worry you'll get hru it =) great write keep it up!

Great job..i have read alot of ur peoms and can tell by the way u write that u have had alot of experiences in terms of broken friendships and betrayal..i myself have aswell. keep writing using ur experiences because i find that ppl's peoms r best when they know what they are talking about. that way they can really enter into the characters mind and describe their thoguths and feeling effectively. all of my peoms r from experience from me or my friends as well. keep up the good work and come check out my stuff if u have time
lots of luv
edwina
xoxo

That's soo sad. Def. 5/5

That's so sad...it always sux when you lose a friend. i hope things get better for you. but your poem was really good i give you a 5/5.

Oh wow...i no how this feels....well anyway, i think its great...keep up the good work

That is sooooo amazing! just today my thought so friend told me that we couldnt be friends anymore....so it was good to read a poem that someone else is hurting as well as me! keep up the great work!

AHHHHHHHHHH ITS SO DARN TRUE!! so darn sad,,,
nice poem lisa