Hey..this poems really really sweet :)

Its really great!! Keep it up

Great poem. really well written

I had a ''friend'' like her hun, and I have seen hgow much she hurt you.
You are a great person, will a great talent as we see here. This poem was excellent and I loved it just as much as I love you or Pie :P

Your flow was niice and you were showing her how much you apreciate her for showing you what a real friend isn't this poem would perfect with my ex best friend!

I've seen how hurt you were, she was not trust worthy.

I love you more than pie or music.

SasaxD

I love this poem, I like the wording you have used and the poem flows perfectly, keep writing and take care Sarah x

Great thinking