Hey nice Poem, i liked it, Whoa i just now noticed your Puertorican, Yes that is Good Cuz im Puertorican Too, Thats Good, We Puertoricans Are good Poets arent we lol, nice poem tho, ill ttyl PeAcE

Nice to run into another fellow P.Rican.
well, thaxz for your coment.

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"As A Bum I Have Lived And I Still Kept My Pride. I've Been Hurt And Abused But It's So Hard Not To Cry."

Good poem, props for you.

Great poem, its very wel written and i like the idea of the mirror.

as for a title (though i admit i am usless at titles) how avbout, "reflections" or something to that effect. i dont know i'm not too good at thinking of titles....

Same here when it comes to title, thats why i put ' i couldnt think of a title so i just put this'. and i dont think you can change titles, or can you?
anywayz, thanks for your coment.

I like your poetry but the odd punctuation is kind of annoying. It takes my attention away from your words and I lose concentration. Therefore, it makes me want to read the poem less and less the further I read.

But otherwise, your poem has substance and a good flow.

I like the poem.Very well written.You got some talent and i hope it gets you far.
much love,

-Russell-

I can relate. awsome poem! 5/5

Wow.. great job on this one!=)

shocked by what i saw...
not surprised i wouldnt be missed...
poisoned the devils...
life sucking toxic kiss...

that was my fave part =) loved it your poem had a deeper meaning than its sapposed to have.. umm not sure if that made sense what im trying to say is theres more to the story but the way you ended leaves us hanging which is great kinda of a mystery lol great write keep it up =)

--emotionless19

This poem now has to be one of my favorites! i love how you wrote this and you choice of words was fantastic! keep it up!

sammie