by Live, Laugh, Love Dec 23, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
lasting love
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We've been together for almost a year now |
by Barbara Jean
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Nothing is forever.... but not everyone is the same.. 5/5 |
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I really like this poem! |
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Ah...love.....I like this one too |
by Leah20
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This poem, it kind of scares me about your relationship. In a healthy relationship, you wouldn't be worrying about these things. Be careful that you don't become too worrysome, you'll kill your relationship. This poem was mediocre, work on rhyme scheme and flow. |
by The Wingless
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This poem is good. but it's kind of short, and it ended very quick, it was kind of suprising. But I don't understand one thing about it, some times the lines are couplets, but sometimes they are just by themselves, is this a mistake? or did you mean to do that. |