Is love forever???

by Live, Laugh, Love   Dec 23, 2005


We've been together for almost a year now

But our love hasn't died

You say you'll love me forever
But how do I know thats not a lie?

NOthing lasts forever
And all good things must come to an end

I hope our love stands the test of time

And nothing will come between us

Forever is a long time

I hope your ready!

And remember...
You PROMISED me FOREVER!!!

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  • 18 years ago

    by Barbara Jean

    Nothing is forever.... but not everyone is the same.. 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by CiNDY iS BAkk

    I really like this poem!
    It's true too! I really like it!
    If you can plz come and check some of my poems! Thanks!
    ~Cindy~

  • Ah...love.....I like this one too

  • 18 years ago

    by Leah20

    This poem, it kind of scares me about your relationship. In a healthy relationship, you wouldn't be worrying about these things. Be careful that you don't become too worrysome, you'll kill your relationship. This poem was mediocre, work on rhyme scheme and flow.

  • 18 years ago

    by The Wingless

    This poem is good. but it's kind of short, and it ended very quick, it was kind of suprising. But I don't understand one thing about it, some times the lines are couplets, but sometimes they are just by themselves, is this a mistake? or did you mean to do that.

    Anyways, this is a good poem no matter what. keep up the good work and always strive to do better.