by ~ShOoOT4ThEmOoON~ Dec 23, 2005
category :
Life, society /
meaning of life
I can feel you. |
by Poetvoices
I think this is a great poem! Keep it up, Sista! |
by -annie vandergaag
Its very good rhyming, but the message is not there. you have something there, but its not completely developed for another person to read and understand. i think adding a few words that make it more explanatory will help it along very nicely - just a suggestion, though. |