Just Live!

by ~ShOoOT4ThEmOoON~   Dec 23, 2005


I can feel you.
I know you're there.
Your fingers running through my hair.
You breath as i do.
And I know.
The snow flakes falling into snow.
Just running running all the time.
From what? From what?
The winds are winding through the chimes.
The bells are ringing in my head.
Who knows how anyone can feel dead?
I'm alive;
I look alive.
I feel Alive.
I plan to strive.
To feel this way,
Until the day,
That this I cannot say.
Maybe when you're older,
You will understand.
you love your live and love yourself.
And this is all you can.
I know it can be hard sometimes,
just to live your life.
Life can be like pretty flowers,
or the sharpest knife.
I haven't lived for years and years,
but for long enough.
Just Live! Just Live! Even if it can be pretty tough!

0


Did You Like This Poem?

Latest Comments

  • 18 years ago

    by Poetvoices

    I think this is a great poem! Keep it up, Sista!

  • 18 years ago

    by -annie vandergaag

    Its very good rhyming, but the message is not there. you have something there, but its not completely developed for another person to read and understand. i think adding a few words that make it more explanatory will help it along very nicely - just a suggestion, though.