Hey,thanks for all your comments. I'm not the biggest fan of slang poems, but I actually didn't mind this one. I think it was mostly because I found it a little bit funny, because women can besoo much like that! lol So can guys I guess, but either way... It was alittle bit hard to read because it's not in form; but the rhythm kept up which made it easier than I had expected. Good job :)

I liked that one too...great job....i love the way write its very unique..ever tried rapping??? WEll Great Job...Joc