Black

by Wasted Fake Smiles   Dec 23, 2005


Darkness, spread across a canvas,
The sky without stars to be of service.
A midnight sky, without a moon,
All a Caterpillar sees in its cocoon.

Black, the color of anger and tears,
The color of sadness and fears.
A color so dark, it's the darkest of all,
The color that always seems to appall.

The color of hate, the color of death,
The color of life, without heartbeat or breath.
The color of rage, the hate, the madness,
The color that leads to eternal sadness.

Yet, my favorite color out of all of them,
The color that leaves you alone, to condemn.
The color of tears, that I've cried,
My favorite color, since I died inside.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Emma

    I loved it. so true. every word every line. it is just great. i loved it. *claps*
    Emma 5/5

  • 18 years ago

    by Allison

    That was really deep. I think that you put a lot of emotion into that. It was so beautiful. Keep up the good work because you are so talented. *5/5*

  • 18 years ago

    by xDryTearsx

    Aw so sad
    thanks for your comment ..
    and dont worry .. i love you .. LoL
    Sorry
    Remember theres always tomorrow
    Things will get better
    I was at breaking point when life turned around and suprised me ..
    So dont worry things will get better
    I promise .. :)
    If you ever wanna talk im here for you
    remember that k
    Love always
    NerdyPants

  • 18 years ago

    by ShadowDancer

    I liked this poem. it was very original. your rhyming was exellent, and it was very well written. i loved it.

    Ruby

  • 18 years ago

    by End Of Eternity

    This one is the best of all & Black is my fav col too...though it has been since my childhood...but back then i never knew the meaning of Black.
    I think i was born to love Black.. :o)

    Great poem once again..keep it up.
    loved this part the best

    Yet, my favorite color out of all of them,
    The color that leaves you alone, to condemn.
    The color of tears, that I've cried,
    My favorite color, since I died

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