Outstanding job, this poem was so well done. I went back and read it multiple times. I thought it was very original and well written.

This one is the best of all & Black is my fav col too...though it has been since my childhood...but back then i never knew the meaning of Black.
I think i was born to love Black.. :o)

Great poem once again..keep it up.
loved this part the best

Yet, my favorite color out of all of them,
The color that leaves you alone, to condemn.
The color of tears, that I've cried,
My favorite color, since I died

I liked this poem. it was very original. your rhyming was exellent, and it was very well written. i loved it.

Ruby

Aw so sad
thanks for your comment ..
and dont worry .. i love you .. LoL
Sorry
Remember theres always tomorrow
Things will get better
I was at breaking point when life turned around and suprised me ..
So dont worry things will get better
I promise .. :)
If you ever wanna talk im here for you
remember that k
Love always
NerdyPants

That was really deep. I think that you put a lot of emotion into that. It was so beautiful. Keep up the good work because you are so talented. *5/5*

I loved it. so true. every word every line. it is just great. i loved it. *claps*
Emma 5/5