Excellent poem. it flowed really well to me and i cant think of anything that would make it better, which i usualy do but dont say it because i dont like to be mean. =P. i really liked it. thanx for sharing

Another well done poem.. i just wish that i could change all of this for you!!! i hate to see you go through pain as you are!!! the nicest people are always the ones that are screwed over in life.. ARG I HATE IT!!!
XOXOXOXO
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amanda

Wow another excellent poem, i can feel the emotion behind your words.. keep it up!