†On the night of Hallow`s Eve,â€
my pain and agony cease to leave.
Leaving me broken, and to grieve.
And to salvation, I don`t believe.
For my damnation becomes a bleak, dark reverie.
†I have nowhere to go,â€
for my home has become a gloom.
And to the memories within my room,
caused my insanity to bloom.
Into a black rose, that has withered away into the darkness of the new moon.
†My cries hidden in the emptiness of†my womb, cried into my hollow tomb.
†Hope and dreams, are to be of my†doom.
And light has faded away into the vanished noon.
†The golden sun has frozen into dark†memory, and has vanished into the bleak reverie.
The bleeding of my tears, left me not to see, the wish to be free.
From the sorrow that dwells within me.
My pale lips stitched together, without a say.
And my eyes wide open to view the ending of the banished day.
i epsecially liked the lines:
"My pale lips stitched together, without a say.
And my eyes wide open to view the ending of the banished day....
†As I`m buried alive in my grave...†"
And also:
"And to the memories within my room,
caused my insanity to bloom.
Into a black rose, that has withered away into the darkness of the new moon"
All round great flow, clever word play and brilliant piece. very well done.