All i HaVe

by ღPrEciiOuz~KiiZeZღ   Dec 24, 2005


All i have to give you
is my unconditional love
and thank god for sending
his most precious angel from above

these days nobody appreciates
the site of real words that are spoken truthfully
the ones that come from the heart
the ones that u pray will never make you part

people show emotion in different ways
sometimes its unexplained
but some people take it for granted
and thats where trust can never be regained

all i have to give is
the love within my heart
the one that I've been handing you
since the very start

all i have to believe is the
words that come from your lips
but once you break a promise
the blood form my broken heart slowly drips

i will give you the world
if i knew that you would never tear it apart
just know that I'll always love you
and trust you with my heart

*another one 4 him...i don't know whats wrong with me...i don't know why i keep writing these poems for him...*

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  • 18 years ago

    by Rican Chemistry

    Ok this poem was real sweet and yeah I dont get you either. But love is crazy like that....See now Imma have to check out flakas other account....lolz this was really good nena keep up the good work....

    ::MELI::

  • 18 years ago

    by Angie

    Hey! wicked poem! very well done, and nice style! Keep up the awesome work! 5/5
    ~Luvz~
    ~Chica~

  • 18 years ago

    by master of shadow

    Great poem. dont really have any constructive critism as its a great poem as it is

  • 18 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    In life you would think that offering someone unconditional love from your heart would make everything all right, but sadly, it does not. Good Job

    --Sher

  • 18 years ago

    by Samantha

    I liked this poem... the message was very clear... the only thing that i have to suggest to you would be to correct some spelling errors and try to give it more rhythm... i could tell you wanted it to rhym but some of them seemed a small bit forced.. both other than that great job... keep it up!

    sammie

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