I liked this poem... the message was very clear... the only thing that i have to suggest to you would be to correct some spelling errors and try to give it more rhythm... i could tell you wanted it to rhym but some of them seemed a small bit forced.. both other than that great job... keep it up!

sammie

In life you would think that offering someone unconditional love from your heart would make everything all right, but sadly, it does not. Good Job

--Sher

Great poem. dont really have any constructive critism as its a great poem as it is

Hey! wicked poem! very well done, and nice style! Keep up the awesome work! 5/5
~Luvz~
~Chica~

Ok this poem was real sweet and yeah I dont get you either. But love is crazy like that....See now Imma have to check out flakas other account....lolz this was really good nena keep up the good work....

::MELI::