I liked the way you wrote the beginning. great job.
take care,
marjan

I really liked this one. And I can so totally relate to it. Keep it up :)

Oh wow.. is the first thing that came to my mind after reading this poem of yours. You just blew me away. I know exactly what you're talking about here. No wonder mine made sense to you.I couldnt help but to read it over and over. Your last stanza was just outstanding and mindblowing.

Thank you so much for your comment. Only then I got the chance to read such a brilliant poem like this which describes my life. Great job, keep up writing as you are a great writer.

Best Wishes
Michelle