by Drew Gold Dec 24, 2005
category :
Miscellaneous /
Misc. poems
And I'd give everything up, |
by Lenny
Your work is just so dense, so emotional, powerful, it toys and tassles with the imagination. You craft it so well I cant even begin to describe the absolute feeling of domination and shock that i get when i read each piece. This one is just as intense as the rest, i like the rhyme, the loss of it, and the regain again. The only part i dont adore is the start, it just seems to flow from nothing as if it is part of a greater piece. It was just a new sort of appoach maybe Im just not used to it... Great piece yet again, |