I really liked this poem... it was well thought out and well written.. the only thing i can tell you is that your very last line seems like it was a lilttle weak... your whole poem is just almost perfect but in my opinion that just kinda took it down a notch... i honestly think that the way you wrote this poem you are very creative.. so i think you can come up with something better.. it seems like you couldnt think of anything so you just wrote the first thing that came to mind and it didnt exactly fit... but other than that extremly good job i really do think that this poem deserves a 5/5... once again nice job and keep it up!

sammie

Brilliant poem. very well written. i cannot think of any possible improvments as its a brilliant poem.

well done

5/5

Wow very nice. Many talented people hide their abilities from the world. In a way I think they are smart for doing so it allows them privacy that they may not otherwise have.

Nice work...

--Sher

Very good poem! 5/5!!

Fantastic poem! I really like it. 5/5 forsure!

Tiffany.xox.

I really really like this poem you did a great job woo! xD I so loved it.