I luved the originality of dis poem hun, it was awesome! haha i wish i could write dat, its really different....just had a fight with my dad, he is such a a*shole, goddd i hate everything right now, mum is a bi*ch she always stands up 4 anthony. dun0o what 2 d0? i guess it doesnt help that i miss u so much....i realli do, i wish i could c u, i hope everything is ok 4 u, luv ya babi

Nice poem i've never seen one like it and thats what was so good.
take care xxx

I liked this one a lot, I love the idea of acting out a life, but behind the scenes being someone else. Well written.
*VioletRaven*
P.S. Thank you for your comments I shall take them to heart.

Hey i love that poems it was great - really orginal

Wow this was amazing it was more like a story than a poem but i loved it!