Is it just me, or does this poem make your head spin, too? I can't make sense of it, Ms. Lenny, and I'm glad I wasn't intended to. That being said, I enjoyed it very much. It has a very...old...feel to it...sort of dusty (I believe you even used that word in the poem itself)...Really something interesting...please keep the poems coming!

Muahahahaha
i enjoyed this :)
i suppose everyone can find their own meaning...
but i hate a mystery :P

That was GREAT!! I think the rhymes MADE the poem as nonsensical as it was, and it was WONDERFUL!! :):) I really enjoyed! It was a good break from some of the gloom and doom of PAQ!!
PV