by erratic hippie Dec 24, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
love is
"but you, my soiled teenage girlfriend |
I really like how you managed to work the 4 lines into the poem, and make it speak out it's message so nicely! you did a really good job with this one :) |
by Aidyn
The images and concepts here are AMAZING, Lenny....really a work of art...and the flow is just so...*as my music teacher would wrongly say* lugubrious *it's a good thing, I promise*. |