Angel Wings

by Jamie   Dec 24, 2005


Never more perfect, you couldn't be
I know that I love you, and that you're meant for me
Things always work out the way that they should
I know I was crazy but glad you understood

You'll be my angel and I'll be your wings
Different but its love and that's the best thing
I'm not your first love, but you are to me
And I love you so much more, I hope you agree

I'll let you go when you want to leave
Believing in forever would make me naïve
I'm scared for then, but this time I won't regret
I know your somebody I’ll never forget

So I'll keep you with me as long as I can
No bloodshed until you break my hearts plan
But for now, you'll be my angel and I'll be your wings
It's all in your power to show me what love means

I wish I could I say I wear my heart on my sleeve
But usually my appearance plays off to deceive
So I hope you just know how much it is that you mean
Even if it's not often stated, it won't go unseen

So you'll be my angel and I'll be your wings
If you pick me up and drop me I'll love how it stings
I trust you and love you so please don't break my heart
You know just a few words can rip me apart

If and when things get rough, we'll ride together
You said this is it, and I thought it couldn't be better
Fix it when your wrong, don't lie, and stay true
And if last time I forgot to say it, I really do love you

**haha this is dumb and it really dosnt flow whatsoever, my bf wrote one first with the same title so i thought id try and be cute and write one back but it didnt work out so well lol

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  • 19 years ago

    by ScarletHaze

    Nice change hun and yes you are good at these! guess that just proves you have true talent xox

  • 19 years ago

    by Sherry Lynn

    I love the refrence to the angel and wings. How romatic this poem is and he is so lucky to have someone like you who loves him with all their heart.

    --Sher

  • 19 years ago

    by nobody truly knows me

    I loved it, i gave you a 5. um, the only thing i could find wrong with it was your rhythm was a little bit off in some lines. other than that... EXCELLENT!!!!!!!
    **lisa**

  • 19 years ago

    by Samantha

    I really liked this poem... it almost seemed like a song to me... it flowed well and was simply beautiful! i dont understand why people did not think that you deserved a 5?!? i think a 5 is exactly what you deserve... i see that you put a lot of time and effort into this and thats what i like... you did a wonderful job and i am extremly impressed! keep it up!

    sammie

  • 19 years ago

    by Eddie

    Nice poem...advise-dont make it rhyme!