Sandcastles

by erratic hippie   Dec 24, 2005


You need no bricks for sandcastles,
They grow with you. Each summer
Thicker, sturdier - not yet secure.

Along the grooves of your palace,
Fingers voyage further,
Carving their own perilous path.

The kingdom rejoices, calling forth
Seashells by the seashore
To come guard the drawbridge.

The horizon slowly pulls the blinds,
While waves gather to tuck in
Your last abandoned fortress.

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  • 18 years ago

    by Jemma

    I love the imagery in this

    jemma

  • 18 years ago

    by perkyshadowgirl

    Wow...
    that's (for lack of better word) deeeeeeep.
    i really like this one :)

  • 18 years ago

    by LostSoul

    This AMAZING. I like it so much create more poems asap. This is great, you are a great poet.

    Continue to make poems.
    Keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by Aidyn

    Hey, Ms. Elena! Wow--that was fast--you're all set up and everything! Anyways, I love this poem so far--just to irritate you, I'm gonna jokingly say "figures--you're a lit student!!" but don't bother taking me seriously. Anyways, I love imagery you've put into this, as well as some cool references. I liked the "seashells by the seashore" line especially. Can't wait to read the rest!

    Saluti!

  • 18 years ago

    by Pure Silence

    Elena!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Amazing! Omgish! lol So Aidyn gave you the site! w00t lol -if your wondering this is Jenn, From all those years ago at cent.-lol -hugs- Welcome to the site hunny! Oh i wish you had joined donner, I just detetled like EVERYthing -cries- but oh well have a Happy christmas and Ill see you in the new year Hunny

    Much Love
    Jenn

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