If i were your heart

by bent but not broken   Dec 24, 2005


If I were your heart
You couldn't turn me away
If I were your heart
Then together we'd stay

My life would be yours
Till I became weak
Maybe if I were your heart
You'd know why I speak

If only I were your heart
Then maybe you would see
That without you I am nothing
Yet you're everything without me

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  • 18 years ago

    by Truly in Love

    Wow.. i loved the last stanza.. it was short yet beautiful.. very well written...

    much love,
    ipsita

  • 18 years ago

    by sunny

    Very good poem

  • 18 years ago

    by Some Random Human

    I enjoyed this poem, I know how it feels to feel that way. I liked the ending a lot. Good work.

  • 19 years ago

    by Ben

    Hey, i really like the idea behind it, its a great idea. but i think you could have..expanded on it a little, made it longer and all that. but good work.
    Ben

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