by Allison Dec 24, 2005
category :
Dark, fantasy /
dark, horror
I prayed to God |
by Natalie
This was great. And its so true. God can`t do everything. 5/5 This was awesome!! |
Wow loved it...the last stanza was my favorite.....I can really relate to this poem...This poem was without a doubt a 5......Thanks for the comment....I always return the favor |
by Juls
Other great poem. Although the flow was hard to follow in the first few stanzas I liked it. Other thing in the 5th stanza you refer to God as a women but than you go back to referring God as a man. Its just some I caught while reading it. I loved the poem though, like I said before in the other comments your an a amzing writier. |
by Loulou
Wow this was soooo good i loved it |
I find this truly breathtaking. I am stunned |