Listen

by krystal   Dec 24, 2005


He looks at her and it makes him want to die
with her makeup streaked face
because hes surly the guy
who put her in her place

he broke her heart
he made her cry
he never liked her from the start
and he is the one who will make her die

she planed it out
looked back at her life
had to shout
then right on time she picked up the knife

then he walked in
his wrists bleeding allot like hers
they have both committed the same sin
now there lives seem like blur's

I'm sorry he says
because i have ruined your life
I'm so sorry baby
because I made you use that knife

I'm sorry that i cheated
she didn't mean a thing
I'm sorry for how you were treated
i know that it must sting

I'm so sorry that i hurt you
believe me it hurt me too
believe me baby because i really do love you

she looks at him smacks him in the face Say's if she didn't mean a thing to you
why'd you treat me like a disgrace
your mad because I'm dying well what else was i to do?

i waited for so long
for you to wipe my tears
i sang this sad little song
but i guess you couldn't hear

you go and kill yourself so i think you love me?
you probably just felt bad
because you couldn't see
when i was sad

no its not true
i was drunk and alone she was the only one there
because you were off with your G crew
what did you do there

drugs drinking sex and games
thats your life i know it sounds fun
but just for a young girl like you who will never be tamed
because every time you come close you run

i tried so hard to make you smile
i guess i wasn't good enough for you
i know you wont for give me at least for a while
but i wish just one more time i could hear you say i love you too

i know you probably hate me
for making you cry
but you never really did see
thats why i dyed

I'm sorry every time things didn't go your way
I'm sorry you had to end your life
I'm sorry i walked away
but most of all I'm sorry I'm the reason you used that knife

I'm sorry i made you turn to drugs
I'm sorry i ignored you
I'm sorry i didn't give you enough hugs
but you have to believe me when i say i love you

it really killed me
when i saw you cry
i know you were hoping i didn't see
but the next day i dyed

*votes comments any ideas for a better ending?* please vote/comment i worked really hard

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  • 18 years ago

    by яock godеѕѕ

    Omg. This is one of the best poems I've ever read... wow... you have so much talent! I hope you continue writing, because you're awesome at it!!! Top marks from me. Please check out some of my poems and tell me what you think... Nat