I lie the reflection, and the desire to help urself, but the inability to do so. i love the realization of the futiliy, something i think we all must come to grips with.
gr8 poem
pat
xoxo

I really like this poem...its sounds really good

Wow! I read one of your love poems and it was really good, unfortunately my computer doenst let me comment on them though - it signs me out :(. But I just wanted to let you know that you have some really nice stuff. I especially liked this one though. Don't change a thing! I hope to see alot more from you :) keep up the good work.

Very nice, it spoke to me.

Ooh, that was nice. you could feel the emotion, I'm sure alot of people feel the same way. good stuff.