I very much enjoyed this! I love reading your poems ^_^ The structure and the rhymes and everything was really nice. Yay!

This was great, everything is perfect, reallly i mean that this is amazing, you re arranged sentences which im not a fan of but you made it work perfectly, there's nothing wrong with this 5/5 great job

I really enjoyed reading this. it is very good. keep up teh good work hun!

Wow you r really good even better than me well im not even that good

Wow you r really good even better than me well im not even that good

Its a really sweet poem, i really liked it. well done. by the way i dont play any instrument , unfortunately :(

Wow, excellent poem. i loved it. thanks for the comment on my poem. and yeah, it's true. anyways, 5/5. keep up the great work.

Nice job and to answer your question yeah I'm working on the melody write know i got it on paper. It sounds alright to me but i need someone else's opinion.

I thought it was very nice! I didn't see anything wrong with it, but then again I might have missed somethings. Some people might rate ur poem lower because their jealous, u gave them a bad rating even though u may have just been honest. I think if someone rates ur poem low and doesnt even comment on why is just, crule lol.

One thing I think could be added just because in my head when I read it, it adds it lol (It's not very impotent either way) I think the line *Pure is the soul that lives life sweetly.* should be *Pure is the soul that lives life so sweetly.* lol just add the *So* its a small word but I think it makes an impact. Other then that small word, I think it is very good=) good job!

Very nice poem

I liked this poem i noticed that the score wasn't as high as it should've been tho. A lot of people can not pull off what you did in this one. You showed a lot of emotion and the words were perfectly written. Great job

The wording was amazing and i wish i could write like this!.....nice job....it rlly reels the reader in within the first stanza...grrt job,
love ya lots,
sore

Thsi is one great poem from 1st line to last. Just a few mispellings. Great Meter. Great message. Great wisdom.5/5

I really like the poem, i flowed very nicely and was worded beautifully. Amazing! - brian

WONDERFUL!!!! =)

I think this poem is so amazing! It was so beautiful and I can't believe how well thought out it was. I mean, I loved how the lines would start with doing something nice, and then getting back something nice because of it. How true that is!
It's been a pleasure reading your poems, and I look forward to reading more!
#7 and final comment!
Charisma*