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by samuel Dec 24, 2005 category : Life, society / inspirational
Coded banality regards tomorrow With crimson sockets Beauty shops are empty But local loos are full Shapely bosoms have Forgotten how to dance Coquetry ranks high Among the daughters of men Sorcery is rife with Using the Spirit to squelch The one you are Most envious of Stalking with hate Detecting simplest faults With string criticisms and Overt diatribes unjustified You are sad Competition takes a pass on you You did not start late But you have not moved fast Not fast enough to outwit That perceived rival That lucky Joseph That rich neighbour Baseness is lifted In your heart You like it in others Others see it in you Banality is overt In the rat race of the slums Where you live doing What you do.
by Robie Lincer
The poem was a bit rocky! but i liked the ending... gave it a 4.0 keep it up!