Ocean of Life

I know what it's like to see sunset on waves, but to know that it's not the same as seeing it with her inches away.

Excellent poem Bill, I really enjoyed it.

For some reason though the last line doesn't quite feel right, maybe it's too short. At it's current length the line feels a bit abrupt and forced. Like you just wanted to end it.

But a small criticism of what remains an excellent poem. Well done.

That is so sweet, Bill. Hopefully someday the future will bring a wedding ring for you. Great Job bae, and I am so glad that you are finding peace on your journey.

Looking forward to hearing from you again soon.

---Sher

Amazing job! you used great details! all your poems are great! xoxo~Catalina

I can just imagine this scene,... beautiful job!

Damn I miss the sea. Miss the surf, miss surfing. They say a picture is worth a thousand words...well some of your words equate to a thousand pictures in my mind. And a few smells too. haha.

well done.