by Sarah Davis Dec 24, 2005
category :
Love, romance /
i love you
I look into your eyes and see the pain, |
This is the second poem of yours that ive read and i can already see the variety in your poetry...... thats a very good thing it shows complexity in the poet which is a good thing because complexity and contradiction make great poetry.....this was a great poem ... and even though your relationship with him is over it doesnt mean the poem is now no longer true it justmeans the truth of the poem lies in the past..... great job |
by swill
I'm sorry you are not with him any longer. No, actually I'm not...because i read your story. Ive figured from wat youve written...that he was a TOTAL (i wanted something like double CAPS for this) DCIKHEAD. I mean...i cannot believe he said ....im done with you just like that. its so ridiculous! i know it is difficult for you to stop loving him..but it seems like you already have. thats a VERY good thing....esp now that you have someone to care for you...another john lol. (im sure he is much nicer...MILLION TIMES) |