Hi Sarah, first I'd like to say thanks for your comment on my poem. Second, this is a very heartfelt write.
I have a couple of good suggestions for you that I don't want to leave here and I was going to private message you but you don't have that option. If you'd like to email me, please do at whispersdream59@yahoo.com.
Take care and once again..... a heartfelt write and very well written as well.