Comments : Crowded Halls

  • 18 years ago

    by JJ

    I don't know what will become of us...looking around at the world today, the future seems scary. sometimes, I wonder if I'll even live that long... 17 years seems old already

    I've got a lot on my mind right now... thanks for the contemplative write. as always, keep up the good work.

  • 18 years ago

    by katie!

    A wonderful poem jacklyn full of insight and intelligience, well done to you, sorry to not have commented for a while, I'm stuck with barely any time on my hands in hospital, you are a wonderful writer and your style is unmatched on this poetry site, well done and take care
    xxxxxxx

  • 18 years ago

    by Ann Stareyes

    Powerful message and wonderfully written....Maybe one day racism will not be an issue in this world, all I can say is Red is the color that flows through all our veins and we should love everyone....

    Love ya, Ann

  • 18 years ago

    by Steven Beesley

    Jacklyn,

    Long time since I dropped in to read one of your poems. This is such a powerful and deeply thought provoking write.

    I wish we could drop all the differences and discrimination and just accept each other. No matter how we appear diffferent on the exterior, we are all the same and tick the same way inside.

    Well written.

    Warmest regards,

    Steve