Comments : Merry Christmas

  • 18 years ago

    by kay tee

    OMG thats really good! Keep up the good work!

  • 18 years ago

    by Live, Laugh, Love

    Aww that was really cute!! Even though I hate Christmas (I've never had a good one) It was really adorable. It flowed nicely...

    !^I Love Being In Love^!

  • 18 years ago

    by ~~Lindsay Woods~~

    Awww...very nice!

  • 18 years ago

    by Kaylee

    I really love the details in this poem as they paint such a vivid picture of what Christmas used to mean. I did think this line kind of threw it off:

    Giving life to the still night.

    I don't know why but it just didn't seem to fit in that stanza. Otherwise, I really do think you captured such a wonderful Christmas spirit.

  • 18 years ago

    by Jenni Marie

    Awwwh i liked this one, it showed lots of hope and joy.