I thought this one need NO work done to it AT ALL!! I loved it. Keep it up.

This is a good start. I see a writer in you.

Hmmm...if I were to give this one a title....it would be.....'loving the shattered'

That was full of love. I liked it. Keep up the good work.

Another great piece, really loved this poem especially where you said, i can see his heart, thats very well placed keep up