Wow thats really good. i know how hard it is saying bye to your best friend, your older sister. but i found it wasn't really a good-bye it was just you have to share her more these days! :-) yeah its hard but we gotta do it. just be happy you still have her hunnie!

WOW That was Excellent Very strong and emotional she's lucky to have a sweet sister like you I know it's hard but at least yall can still talk :) so really it's not a goodbye. beautiful poem 5/5 :)